Thank you so much for the kind words!
Really happy you and many others enjoyed the chapter and all critque will ofcourse be put to consideration! Was worried the mind-sequence would put people off since it's far from the vore-centric game I know you all want, but lore is also important in any game :)
As for the attack percentages, they will stay as they are because I have skills which increase landing odds, BUT I will in that case remove the evasion odds. That way you only have to deal with of your attack lands and not the enemies evasion as well.
With the refights, don't you worry! I have actually in the start of making the next chapter reworked a lot of fights, changed some stats and made them easier over all. Both because I realise me with all my in-game knowledge and premade strategies are not the same as you guys seeing all of this for the first time lol.
Thank you also for wanting to help out my project! For the moment I don't really need help in form of story writing, since I got most of it down, because right now I need more help with making areas and the game itself XD
Also about their bodytypes, true. They may be focused on chest and ass but(t) where else do you think all that weight on their bellies will go?! Back to their guts as fat? Don't be ridiculous lmao
(Jokes aside there will be more belly on them, don't you worry)
Once again, thank you for the kind words! Really need someone with me down here in the trenches lol
Have a great day and hope to see you when I release the next chapter... in another few months maybe ;)