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It is me again. Played Chapter 3, and honestly I really enjoyed it! Of course, it will work much better when its part of the longer series and not the end of the game fn, but still this is an amazing chapter! Lots of lore, I lvoed how you developed El'Lena's character and would love to see more! Also, Mario Galaxy music is always the #1 peak content. I will note two things:


-PLEASE change how attack percentages land normally. On the slime boss fight I had to refight it 4 times due to horrifically bad RNG. My recommendation is to make the normal attack land 100% of the time normally and keep the rest largely the same. It will vastly improve how ppl will feel about the bossfights and will feel failures are their mistake rather than game being horrifically unlucky


-I see you are implementing a system similar to Mario & Luigi boss refights. While that is fun, you do need to be careful about making it too difficult. Neither the girls have AOE attacks yet, especially Julina. So pushing many enemies is not a great plot to make a fight feel challenging but fair. However, that opinion may change if new chapters and powers alleviate the problem.


Overall, I love your work once again! Still think this is a very strong base you're building and can't wait to see more. Also, if you want me to help with story and plot points, let me know! Been wanting to help a few devs with stories so that I can reinforce your strongest ideas and help alleviate your weaker ones. However, that is all up to you! Otherwise, I am still a big fan of this game and I definitely finding it an enjoyable time(even though I find the girl's body proportions a bit too much considering its a belly focused game. And thats coming from someone who's making an Ass Expansion game lol). Otherwise, keep up the good work! Do not lose motivation on such a strong project


And yeah college sucks. I am with you on that in the trenches 🫡

Thank you so much for the kind words!
Really happy you and many others enjoyed the chapter and all critque will ofcourse be put to consideration! Was worried the mind-sequence would put people off since it's far from the vore-centric game I know you all want, but lore is also important in any game :)

As for the attack percentages, they will stay as they are because I have skills which increase landing odds, BUT I will in that case remove the evasion odds. That way you only have to deal with of your attack lands and not the enemies evasion as well.

With the refights, don't you worry! I have actually in the start of making the next chapter reworked a lot of fights, changed some stats and made them easier over all. Both because I realise me with all my in-game knowledge and premade strategies are not the same as you guys seeing all of this for the first time lol.

Thank you also for wanting to help out my project! For the moment I don't really need help in form of story writing, since I got most of it down, because right now I need more help with making areas and the game itself XD
Also about their bodytypes, true. They may be focused on chest and ass but(t) where else do you think all that weight on their bellies will go?! Back to their guts as fat? Don't be ridiculous lmao
(Jokes aside there will be more belly on them, don't you worry)

Once again, thank you for the kind words! Really need someone with me down here in the trenches lol
Have a great day and hope to see you when I release the next chapter... in another few months maybe ;)