Hi! Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback!
I get what you mean about Kit's character. I was trying to make whatever was troubling them sort of ambiguous so maybe the reader could sort of fill in the blanks themself, but it does just kind of ends up feeling empty and not thought out. I also agree with you that the lack of descriptions of the hunters is a bit of a detriment to trying to imagine the scene (I'll admit, part of the reason I had them described by their footwear was so I could get out of describing their physical appearance, as I suck at descriptions lol).
Thanks again for your feedback! :)