hiii thank you so much for playing the demo and taking the time to write all this out!! ^_^ we really appreciate the honest feedback and i'll definitely relay everything to the team
about the descriptions, i get what you mean, but it's done on purpose and is a stylistic choice to sit with the town's everyday mundanity (for a while after this as well) because when things go left, it'll go left really fast. but i hear you on how it can make the story slip away sometimes & will think about trimming or highlighting the important bits better in the long run.
for the computer and chat stuff, we're super sorry it got confusing!! we'll def look into different ways to show thoughts by the next update so they don't cover the screen or pop up out of nowhere, and i'll see what can be done about the scrolling (´｡• ᵕ •｡`)
the love interests are cain, silas, genesis, and lottie! though, as of right now, only silas has a prologue route. the white haired man is just as important as you want him to be, and he does get mentioned in the chatroom again depending on your choices. just a quick heads-up, the game actually leans more toward other genres than pure romance, though you'll definitely see those romantic moments develop later on. thanks again for being so nice about sharing your playthrough experience, it really helps us make the next bits better!! we're so glad you still thought it was dope overall