Are you telling me you didn't immediately fall head-over-heels for the small, noble lady? I'm truly shocked! Not really
Bias in the POVs was a big part of the story/themes when writing, so it's a great relief that they were picked up on. These are all characters who are operating on incomplete information, trying to coexist, with varying levels of interest in said coexistence. It was a lot of fun contrasting Syrol and Jorjun, especially as it relates to someone with far more years of life experience versus someone who wants more.
I greatly appreciate the feedback. I'd love to write more with this setting in the future.