Marie's character concept is easily one of my favorite characters I've seen in this entire Jam. What do you mean this old sweet grandma summons fairy tales to slaughter evil bastards as a hobby? Her having an injury that's just "Disappointed" is brilliant.
I second the comments the others have made regarding the grotesques and really like the suggested changes in your responses. I'd like to see them act as more than just swarms of hitpoints. Looking forward to see where you take it.
Also going the extra mile and including hand drawn art on every page is absolutely insane...