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Well a few notes and suggestions:

Due to the crappy design of my phone, the buttons for auto, skip, menu, etcetera are hard to tap normally, and impossible to press in its… fall protector(?), as the two longer sides of the screen bend over their edges of the phone. This is a flaw with my Samsung phone model, but it'd be nice if the dialogue box\text and the bottom buttons were moved up a bit.

I was caught off-guard when the story ended, as I didn't notice a clear distinction of when chapter 2 started.

Even though both chapters are included, the title screen implies it's only chapter 2. might be better to use revision numbers instead?

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Edit: Also, randomly during the Bad Start section, Rea's top is randomly pulled off her breasts, but a few cuts later and it's back over her breasts.

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All that aside, I rather enjoyed the story.



Perhaps in later chapters, Rea reprograms your collar to prevent you from initiating contact with fmales (excluding female androids, if existent) without being instructed to do so under the effects of payment; however, you still get paralyzed if a female initiates contact with you while the collar isn't under payment.

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Thanks, I'll keep that in mind, UI design is not something I've totally mastered yet, but I'll definitely look into it. And thanks for letting me know about the bug in the "Bad start" section, for the mobile version I had to change the way the animations are handled in Renpy, so I might have screwed that up a bit haha.

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Quite welcome.

I enjoy helping where I can.