[SPOILERS BELOW]
First things first, I have to praise the writing, because DAMN you outdid yourself this time! 😲 Not only because of the length of the script (35k in a month?! that's basically as long as MBDSW 😵), but just the general atmosphere and the imagery were very effective (and impressive!). I especially liked the scene at the cemetery - it started so sweet and peaceful, only to turn into the shocking reveal (which I anticipated as soon as you mentioned a son, as the big guy kept giving me the ick for the better part of the story 😬). I kept thinking 'Don't go there, Chim,' and the game went there anyway fkdlfdls But it makes for a more impactful story, so good! I just feel for the poor boys and the things they had to go through 😞
Also, props to you for thematical consistency throughout - the repeated imagery of water and its constant presence in the story were very well done in my opinion. And then it felt very satisfying when you ended the story with fire - it made for a nice contrast.
I'm super curious why you picked the Aquarius, though (except for the obvious association with water), because I can't help but wonder about the statistical probability of two people having the same number of moles in the same arrangement, and surely there are constellations with fewer stars lol. (But this is in no way a dig at you, but more of a loose thought. 🙏)
And the visuals were nice and impactful, too, especially with the little animations. 👌 (I only wish there was a gallery to see all the CGs (30+?!))(BTW, my favorite was the one with Jonas lying in bed, it's so pretty 💕)
Overall, I think it was a good story! Heavy, for sure, and uncomfortable at times (a lot of the times), but gripping and nuanced, and thematically cohesive as well. Very nice job!