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Up front, I'm reading and rating this submission in between meetings while eating gummy bears way too early in the morning because it's already been a stressful one. I feel like the theme here is perfect for the moment I'm in right now. 

What an amazing premise. I love the prologue story at the beginning. I think this is something I absolutely need to do for my submission. I love the idea of adding a second, darker chapter to the classic Willy Wonka story. 

The five stats are evocative. I love Nonsense, Heart, and Wonder especially. I think Perspiration and Head could be just a little bit more silly to match those. What came to mind for me was Wiggles and Wiles, though Wiles would have some overlap with Nonsense I suppose. Just a thought though, they're definitely good as they are already. Also the Imagination resource cap being the combined value of a character's heart+wonder is very thematic. 

Flavoring the GM dice pool as a bag of candy/flavor pool is so good. I feel like you could also do the same thing with the team pool and call it a candy bowl or something, but that might be just a bit confusing. 

Weariness is a great "injury" system. Reducing dice pool is a great way to show the sugar crash happening at the table.

Putting something on the character sheet for your dice pool/ spend your successes is SO SMART. What a great way to help cut out some of the challenge in helping players remember what they can do with their dice. 

Great job!

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I'm sorry about your stressful morning but happy you had gummy bears! 

The stats are all pulled from quotes from the movie, which I know isn't exactly practical, but does bring me secret joy. 

It's funny you mention the name of the Team Pool, because that's probably the 5th thing I've called it. I still haven't found something I love, but this was what I was settled on when it was submission time lol. 

I'm glad you liked the dice chart! I had made a little chart for Eat the Reich on how to spend dice when I ran it at cons, because that was always the hurdle for new folks, so I thought it made sense to just include it on the sheet, especially since I didn't have time to do any pretty layout stuff! 

Thanks for the great feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it!