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H-hey, the number of unanswered questions isn't supposed to grow exponentially like that..! But yes, the dialogue here is slick and fast-paced, and full of original ideas. One thing I would prefer is to have each of the various characters take on more of a well-defined role within the overarching storyline. But it might just be too early to tell.

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Thank you!

Yeah, the first draft doesn't really have any character arcs necessarily, and that's mostly down to it being a first draft (and a parody). I lean a little too much on the Extra Stage as a catch-all for answering questions

I'll definitely keep these things in mind going forward, thank you