Thanks! I think my writing could definitely improve, maybe I’ll ask for some help on that I don’t have too much experience (especially with writing believable girls www). I will rework the first section to have more to do and increase the walking speed, that part was mostly because of my lacking animation skills and having to match it up with the speed. I think if i change those things the atmosphere can shine even harder, also planning on adding some flashing images and other similar visuals.