Okay, so what a ride this game was haha😂
I don't think the idea really works with the theme, since it's all scripted, however the story was quite funny, and I like that you had plenty of cutscenes, pretty unusual for a game jam.
The combat feels quite buggy and rudimentary, but I loved seeing the ennemies's meshes exploding when starting to ragdoll x) the laser beam was cool to use as well.
The visuals are what I consider the bare minimum, you could try adding some lighting and more varied textures to make it look nicer! I also noticed you had some UI scaling issues, I suggest you look for anchors and the viewport stretch settings to fix that 😉. Also, try custom themes! it's crazy how a little of this can turn a generic UI into a more professional one.
Since you credited FL Studio I believe you made the music yourself. It's quite good! the composition is really nice and you have a lot of variation throughout the track. I think you could improve it more by adding some effects (like some vibrato on your electric guitar), and also some instrument variation with automation clips!
everyone starts somewhere! Keep working hard champ✌️