Nice background track, could be nice when youre working. My only note is that its hard to settle down when the melody keeps doing one wild chord progression after another. I feel if they need to be there they should be spaced apart better. With more breathing room.

1:15 to 1:25 is a good example. Theres like five diffrent chord progression right after another in rapid succesion

Thank you everyone for kind words and feedbacks! 

This is really my first time writing music for games or bg music, not my first time writing music tho, because I usually write a piano piece or guitar piece like the second track, and never really in my mind making a piece that has different kind of instruments until now.

I appreciate all of your feedbacks, and im gonna listen to all of it.

: )

This was lovely - I especially like your choice of harmony, as others have pointed out. It's quite fitting for the jam's theme but also works tonally for what the title implies.

I think if I were to give you some feedback, I'd suggest trying to have a little bit more of a "singable" melody from your flutes or whichever lead instruments you choose. Right now it revolves quite a bit on quarter notes on the downbeat - maybe next time try throwing in some different rhythms or starting/emphasizing notes on the upbeat instead. I think it'll add some nice changes and interest in the melody and allow you to better emphasize an idea or a vibe you're going for.

Thanks for sharing what you've made, and keep up the good work :)

A pretty song with nice instrumentation and chord progression.

I’d suggest pulling back the reverb and volume of the drum track - it feels like it’s in a different sonic space than the rest of the instruments.

I really like the chord choices!