Hey there buuuuudy~ love the work! Its considerably amazing despite being new! Although, The intro IS kinda long, I still liked it, Looking forward to your next update ^^ I could provide you artwork if I could, But Since I'm literally just a student I don't think I can help you... But! The story itself is amazing, Can't wait for the next update ^^
Also another note: I LOVE AND THANK YOU FOR THE QUOTE AT THE BEGINNING BECAUSE IT'S RIGHT, "THERE IS ALWAYS AT LEAST ONE PERSON EXPERIENCING THE SAME AS YOU"