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This kind of story has been told many, many times, especially with a western heist style.  But with that said, I cannot deny how well-presented and appealing this was to read.  The best writers are able to take tired tropes/plots and still make them interesting.  The world created here is fascinating without being overbearing.  Both characters immediately stand out and are very likeable.  It tells a tight story, and leaves plenty of breadcrumbs to want more.  

It makes me think of Samurai Jack, mixing a lot of time periods together: in this case, SciFi and Western.  The clash of cultures between our protagonists was handled very well.  The dialogue was believable: very human.

I would absolutely love to read more set in this universe, especially when it comes to the company Nipparad is fleeing to expose.

Thanks! The story is set in a world with a very specific premise (Cyberpunk / Space Opera with low-tech and psychic powers taking the place of technology) I've been writing other stuff on, which hopefully comes across in some of those crumbs. But I didn't want to get too much into that in the description or other ancillary materials, since after all the story is supposed to be accessible to anyone that hasn't read the other stuff.

Yeah, I suppose the core idea is pretty old hat... But hey, it's still worthwhile to play in a familiar playground sometimes, right?