All right, I know you didn't have lots of time making this. I like the ambient section its very nice, the transition now, this is where I can feel the "lack of time making the track" I like the vibe, don't like the arrangement, especially the octave strings at 3:00, the melody feels very off with what's playing underneath, now is the time to open the orchestration book and see what texture and orchestral elements you can put instead of playing octaves strings all the way. Cool percussive elements too, pretty unique. Good job !
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Thanks FoxHyode! I apricate your honesty! Indeed. The transition is quite lacking. Thanks for pointing that out. Plus the the octave section at 3:00, needs to be redone as you said. Again, thanks for your honesty! When I come back to the piece I will take stock of all of these things and mix it up. Plus I need to add more percussive elements.
Thanks for listening!