Lovely game.
I really like the story and the art style. For the design itself only complain I have is inconsitency in pixel sizes. When choosing pixel graphic I always recommend trying to use the very same assets or scaling them so the single pixels would line up etc.
Effects are integrated very well and I laughed a bunch of times when reading the things on the transition screen :D (You are a courier, Harry) xD
The game play itself is simple, nothing 'special' regarding the mechanics. Everything feels polished and works, for me no bug occurred. Personally after a short amount of time clicking thorugh the decisions the game felt a bit repetitive and kinda boring. But this is just due to personal reasons, I am more focused on actually doing something within a game instead of choosing things and having story only. But the narrative and overall story is great!
Overall very good entry!