Really good game. I like the art, and the pixel arts as well of this game. The story/writing is really good enough for a game jam, and there are some funny moments as well, that I dig hard a bit anyways, especially sussed out of the loop. I think if there are things to mind for a post-jam update, it will be having to be able to restart a section, instead of having to re-do the game 2 more times.
Still I enjoyed it.
(anyway, I made a playthrough of this game, it’s on the later part of the video. I hope you enjoy!)