Really great stuff! I’ve saved it and I’ll definitely be playing more since I didn't get as far as I wanted to. It’s an interesting project. The music needs some refinement, and a volume control option would be nice... also, the track volumes aren't normalized. One song is loud, the next is quiet, etc. I tend to notice these things since I’m primarily a sound designer.
The project is fun, looks great, and really made me want to keep playing. I’m not usually a big fan of long dialogue or narrative arcs, but the 'magical girl' genre kind of calls for it. Congrats!