very excited to get more, but i did want to mention a couple things. first, and much more minor, is the coding on the pronouns of the ROs. when the ROs are women, it says 'hers' when it should just say 'her' (e.g., on the last page of the chapter 1 preview, it says "Hers father..."). second, and honestly more disruptive in my experience, the name of the kingdom being "Ce Cerine" kind of throws me off. mostly just the first part, really. at first, i thought it was just a typo, but as it was repeated i'm wondering if it's not? and if it isn't, it's kind of unclear how i'm supposed to pronounce it, and maybe it's just the autism but that is important to me.
in any case, i very much enjoyed reading what's there, and am excited for future updates. good luck and stay healthy, author!