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Thanks for the feedback! A few feel this way about Dalia, but I intended to make her a little more calculating, and hopefully you might like her in chapter one! 

Hey! I'm sorry if it's disruptive. You pronounce it (Say Sah-reen)! I will add a pronunciation bit in-game. And the pronouns should be fixed in the next update! 

The rewritten prologue is out right now! Chapter one is on the way!

I will definitely be adding one if it makes things easier! 

it's a peek of chapter one!

Thank you for your point of view! In my opinion, the og didn't have much happening in terms of MC's childhood. You never met the twins, and we never really saw what truly happened to MC. I hope chapter one will give you a little more of what you're looking for!

hopefully it's a little easier now!

thank you!

this has been fixed my love

that's actually a mistake on my part thank you for pointing that out! the prince or princess is meant to be the title, but I mixed some things up coding wise so I will fix that!

Hey! The demo hasn't been updated beyond that point, but the rewrite is almost fully coded!

Thank you everyone for your kind words! I really appreciate them.

Chapter 2 is not over yet! That’s simply all that's been coded in currently, sorry about that :’)

That's a good idea! (Sorry for the late reply;'))

Hi! The MC is 18 at the time of the betrothal. Aleksandar/Aleksandra is 22, Rhys/Rhea is 21, Calix/Calixta is 19, and Mestrn/Mestra is 22! If you have any more questions, check out my Tumblr!

Don’t worry! That has already been fixed, and will be available in the next update! That was a mistake on my part, I'm sorry about that. 

The whole situation about the arranged marriage will be revealed in the story! There is a reason why it was the MC and no longer else.

And thank you for leaving this comment! It gives me a lot of help about what sort of personalities the MC should have. <3

I’m not very experienced, but I’ll attempt to find a way to prevent from saves being lost!

That was fixed! :)

Ah, no, romance is very central in this story. 

I believe that was fixed!

Thank you for your feedback! This story is very much in the early stages, and I'm glad you made this post! I will definitely add more choices in the next update, with this in mind. This is my first interactive fiction story, so I'm still learning. But I do want you to be able to portray something like that! :) Thanks again.

thank you, hehe

I'll fix it, not to worry!