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This was a fun experience. It’s very creative to pick up a very simple mechanic - go front, left, right and back - and bring some magic to it through great voice acting, building a story, and the immersion of the sound design. It’s a complete experience that doesn’t require to do that much (well, I say this but I’m not a programmer!) - but you know what I mean.

I could use some more fine tuning for the sound EQ, as I felt the grandpa’s voice was a bit too quiet at the start. His second voice was a bit better, I think. Which also brings me to the funny bit that grandpa changed his voice / accent, midway through the voyage. I gotta say this broke my immersion for a bit, as it felt like a different personality and person. It also put me a little off that the grandpa always called us “kiddo” and sometimes used that vocative every sentence. I think if this was less overused, it would have had a better effect. It made me think about how maybe the creators just didn’t want to give us a name to make us self-insert better. But had he used this word less, I might not have started reflecting as much about it.

But I really enjoyed the sounds of running around the boat, like a kid would! Energetic jogging in a wooden floor of a boat; and the creaky wood, and the sea noises.

And I also loved how the tutorial was so immersive. I love when that happens. Granted, not all tutorials can be so immersive, but it’s a great thing when they are. You get thrown inside the story when you’re learning what to do.

I think this could still use a bit more polish, but nevertheless it is quite polished already and a great experiment. I’m not sure how I could see this growing into other games or a bigger game, but I nevertheless would kinda like to, because the setting was really nice. Good job, kiddos. Hehe.

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I'm glad you enjoyed parts of the game experience :) As for the voice acting, i had instructed the voice actor Christian Minges, to use gender neutral wording, so the player could be more immersed as the grandchild of the story. And I'm really happy that you found the audio tutorial immersive. And while the gameplay was rather simplistic, I have been happy to read all the lovely comments about people enjoying the immersive experience of the game. Thank you so much for the extensive feedback 🌟