This was a pleasing experience! It got me to chuckle a few times, and it had a nice pacing. I like the way you share some lines and then let us continue - even if we’re not making a decision, we still get to savour what just happened and have a feeling that we have some agency. That is good, and avoid getting us bored or overwhelmed with information. I was able to read back when I didn’t understand a wrd or two.
The music is nice for settings the mood for a silly medieval setting; I wish this could have been done by a talented musician. You know, you can find some in our discord community.
I am also curious about the TTS voice you used. It has a nice accent and intonation. Mind sharing the source?
And lastly I will also say that it’s not always clear who’s talking. I felt at some moments that was me, but others it was someone else? I didn’t realize if I was Lyndor or Lyndor’s friend. This was not always clear. I wonder if you could identify the speaker, or maybe, since you’re making use of TTS, provide different TTS voices for different characters - although this could get out of hand quickly, once you start adding more characters… well, I’m not sure what the solution is, but it was a fun time.