Pretty neat little story going on!
The images fit really well together; getting them all the same style can be pretty difficult, so good job on that part.
I feel the story has a sorta dark/mystery vibe, and maybe the music could be updated to fit that. Or, have it change based on the scene being shown.
Good job overall
thanks! my goal was to focus on short story and ran through many iterative passes with AI and human rewrites. I also experimented a lot with music and this track really seemed to work for me, setting the old school edutainment vibe. in future games i want to experiment with switching to more dramatic music at key points, just keeping things focused for now.
