There's a lot of improvisation and variety in this track which I appreciate. I would consider making the notes less staccato overall, as it is hard to make out the pitches when things move quickly. The chaotic nature of the rhythm and harmony makes it hard for me to imagine this as a town theme, having more patterns and a steady beat would help get it there.
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Thanks for the honest feedback, I'm sure it's true--I tend to be chaotic generally where things that are tame enough to for example appeal to broader audiences are around just 5% of the more coherent ones. The remainder are valid but a person has to be "in the right frame of mind" or are suitable as backgrounds in my own vibe code creations which are eclectic in game-rules to start with.
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