nice work, here are my thoughts...
- very good start menu and options.
- cool eye opening effect.
- there is a menu icon in the corner for RenPyWeb, probably you can disable that.
- the art/music is setting awesome atmosphere and vibe.
- great presentation with the combo of imagery, sound, and music.
- i like how new options open up when you replay it
- wow, there is a lot of content here!
- looking forward to seeing what you make next.