It's really good entry!
I passed the whole game. I really like how you designed mechanics and story with reference to dark souls. I was amazed how you reconstructed behavior of archer (running away) and first boos fight! *clap*
That small details like animations when my potion is empty is amazing!
The problem I see is peace of the game, fight is probably too slow and easy for fans of souls game. I was able to kill skeletons by just spamming attack. I would encourage to just "copy" feeling of hollow knight into the game, it will make it really great.
Congratulations on your submission! There is a great potential in game so keep working!