The writing is evocative, and the puzzles are fun! A codex or recipe book may help, there's a lot to keep track of! An easy way to get more honey worms could help reduce confusion, I restarted twice because it looked like I messed up, later I learned that new ones can appear by waiting. Color-coding some key terms or adding icons can be a way to get players adjusted to navigating the game world and figuring things out. Adding some music and sound effects to set the atmosphere would probably keep players more engaged than any gameplay adjustment, audio can do a lot of heavy lifting in games where players think and wait. The premise and flow of the game are really neat both in setup and execution, it's a really dynamic approach to kinky storytelling, I like it a lot!