Nice! A bit too much too read for my taste but very atmospheric.
I did not like the "day loss" mechanism and I did not understand why you are hopping around in different countries...
Maybe less day loss to be able to explore a little more would be better.
Finally, it is a pity that some parts lack an image...
I gotcha, it was very wordy. I made the individual pages longer in order to cut down on straight click through, but I don't have that balance down yet.
That's a note I've made, too, that it needs more backstory. It should be more clear that you're following entries made in the diary to learn about specific cultural fae. I did initially have the day loss mech set at 1 day for everything, including countries, but if you can get through everything in one sitting, why come back? ;)
I agree about the images, I ran out of time. Also I wasn't aware that I could use background images in Arcweave that stretched across multiple frames, so that's something I've learned now!
