A nice little adventure location for CY_BORG. Good maps of the bar and a nice network map of the server. The adventure allows for a number of different approaches that the PCs might take. You've done a great job giving the jobsite the kind of grody details that CY_BORG excels at.
I do think the titular hacker collective is kind of a non-entity in this scenario. The bar staff don't have any connection to the ALC even though the server is housed in their basement. Whatever connections they have to UCS could also be expanded on. If you do another draft of this adventure, you could really use more details on ALC and maybe a couple of hacker NPCs present at the bar.