A minor inconsistency: When taking the quest to find Jimmy, he shows up during Lucy's event with the mysterious lady. Denying the event until the quest is resolved should fix that issue.
It would be nice if the navigation arrows could have a different color, maybe an contrasting outline. There is a fair number of arrows a first-time player would miss, because they blend into the background.
Another inconsistency: Evie's first event has her reading a book after sitting on the MC's lap. I don't think she could do that yet. It would make more sense if she asked the MC to read the book to her. Aside from being logical, it gives another way of Evie and the player to bond a bit.