Thank you for the feedback! I was in a very Mothership state of mind when I made this one so I was trying to stick to the dice in that system, but I agree that generally the d6 is much more intuitive. Additionally, I think the layout and the NPC density tie in because this adventure was originally a couple pages of bullet points and I definitely lost some plot in the shuffle and attempt to make it look pretty. Going forward I'll keep in mind the final format while plotting. Thank you again for taking the time to leave a review, I really appreciate it! :D