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Clear and well-structured layout. Could do with a map, though. The writing is not always as clear as the layout. I stumbled over a few odd choices of words. You use several expressions, such as "bioroids" and "analytical clones," which are never explained. I don't understand "boot from LAN & destroy ice-breaker," and I am not sure what Dr. Bahi is working on, either.

So, my recommendation would be: try to make your writing easier to understand, and either (briefly) explain the concepts, or link it to some published system that explains them.