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LOL so first off, I love your cover. And the gist of this system is great, too: it's like a mad-libbing adventure! The trio of rabbits (including one monster) is a fun twist, too, as you want it to become monstrous enough to protect you from the wolf attack, but not so monstrous that it reaches 5+ and eats your rabbits instead 😅 My only qualm is that, in your list of verbs, a lot of those aren't verbs. "Toxic" and "Suspicious," for example, are adjectives. "Oozing" and "Suspecting" would work, though :D Or you could expand that section to include adjectives, because "Broken Bridge" is at least an equally tough threat for rabbits as, like, "Swaying Bridge." And "Massive Shark" is at least as scary as "Hungering Shark."

With that said, this is a silly, fun, unique, inventive adventure. Something I've come to expect from you, and you definitely didn't disappoint! Especially with the incredibly little amount of time you took, my goodness!! 😮 

- ✨Beth

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Thank you.  I love the cover too. <3 Your compliments mean a lot to me. I know it is cliche but I do work better under pressure. I tend to procrastinate and lighting a fire under my own butt is the best way for me to get most things done. It can backfire.  You, as usual, are right about the verbs. One of the reasons I like entering your jams so much is the feedback you and Angel give it is always helpful. I will be sure to update the list of verbs. :)

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Oh wow, well yay! Goodness, first the day-making comment on our game, and now this too 🧡 This is 100% why we run jams, honestly: so we can all uplift and encourage each other!

Also, I didn't wanna comment on it because it was a reply to Angel's comment, but I saw you talk about narrative in games. I just wanted to say that you really seem to have that down! Your last Ludum Praxi game where you play out the three cyclical stories that lead to one another was so cool like that, and now this one is really epic there too. Narrative is no doubt a specialty of yours 🙌🥳 

And YES omg I swear, if not for a deadline, I'd never get anything done 😅😅😅😅 I try to share my goals for each day and week publicly, too, so I feel ashamed if I don't complete stuff lol

- ✨Beth