Hey there really good mission. I think you need another proofread pass as there are a few grammatical and sentence structure errors. It would be cool if you could some how combine the Backgroud and The Pitch sections to be one concise section.
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I thought about that and I think I decided against it for good reason. It's one think to understand the region and it's another thing to think the job is worth taking.
Old Mo is something of a complex character. Giving her the background to help game runners understand her perspective fits in better with the Pitch than the Background in my mind.