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Thanks for the criticism! Yeah I thought upon reading Rookie that it was ment to just be for all players so that is an oversight on my part. Might be better as a unique FitD thing with cyberpunk themes? 

I didn't want to lead in anyway of where the caches would be in the zones or how players would find them but Perception or search" could be the go to route that might be pretty boring. I could be more clear about where they are in the zones maybe even puzzles or challenges etc.  Good shout for yellow_ware giving hidden objectives, private messages to specfic players to test them more. 

Yep I was aware they shared that name and thought it would be funny. The main goal was to mix the supernatural and cyberpunk like the Shin Megami Tensei series. The opposing force are the Daemons. They will kill a runner depending on their mood and if you fail checks. It seems like Threat = Harm in CBR+PNK, I'll have to make that clear or add other opp groups within the Zone. 

As far as the map, it is just a stand in. I ran out of budget for the project to have a full map piece but hopefully that will happen in the future! 

My goal with SHIV was to pack in enough to get folks into play without overwhelming them. Really glad that came across well!

Hey there really good mission. I think you need another proofread pass as there are a few grammatical and sentence structure errors. It would be cool if you could some how combine the Backgroud and The Pitch sections to be one concise section. 

Really great mission! I feel like you could keep the same voice throughout the whole mission, addressing "the players" instead of "we".  I also think Scene 7 feels a little rushed needs a some more info on the NPC there. 

oop sorry got you covered now :)