Had to disqualify your submission because there is nothing to play on your page and your Discord account isn't on our official Discord so I cannot contact you. That being said I played your non-jam one so here is the feedback for that!
Playability:
Simple gameplay and interactions that lead the narrative forward. Focuses entirely around interacting with objects and characters in the right order.
Theme:
The game is played from the perspective of a live stream which fits the theme generally. Would love to see more interaction here outside of scrolling text.
Cleverness:
Really liked interacting with all the NPCs especially at the end. Puzzles were simple but enjoyable even if they can be easily brute forced.
Artistic Style:
Fantastic 2d paper style for the characters. Nice transitions between environments. Really enjoyed this overall.