This appears to be a mission built on the Blades in the Dark ruleset, reimagined for a cyberpunk setting. The approach has potential, but it does not come across as system-agnostic, IMHO. Presenting it explicitly as a micro-hack of Blades in the Dark might strengthen its identity.
The writing is clear and accessible, but too "broad" for my style. It makes the scenario feel somewhat generic and harder to ground in cyberpunk genre.