You have made a lot of progress compared to the version I tested halfway through the jam. Most of the bugs I encountered on my first play test have been fixed and I feel like you've also fixed most of my small complaints with the game. The ambiance is still great and there is way more tension since the behaviour of the maiden is more consistant.
Still the tps camera is a questionnable choice imo for this type of game and makes moving through the manor a bit tiresome. The underground fog makes navigating the basement a bit weird. The maiden is still harmless when outisde the manor.
Anyway this is imo a really good submission and I had fun playing through your game!