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This looks really cute! I think my main feedback would be:

- More variety, especially with facial features, ability to have different expressions, plus some afro hair options

- The Details category should be in the Body section of the creator rather than clothes.

- The music feels strange and kind of puts me on edge a bit? But I'm not knowledgeable about music so I couldn't tell you why lol.

Colour stuff:

- Perhaps more of a medium colour for the character background (or the ability to change the background colour) as with darker hair or skin the character can get lost in the background a bit.

- All the skin colours look a bit oversaturated. I think maybe the bright pink shading on the lightest skin contributes to this because the shading colour clashes oddly with the more yellow/orange tone of the skin. Similarly on the middle skin colour, the bright pink/red shading stands out on the shadow under the chin as being the deepest, most saturated colour in the whole character and only looks cohesive if you have a character with pink hair and/or eyes.

- The shine highlight colour on the brown hair is way higher contrast than all the other hair colours. So bringing it more in line with the soft highlights on the other hair could be more cohesive (This is a very small nitpicky thing though)

Looking forward to seeing this develop!