Really awesome game! Great art, story, and interesting concepts. The mini-games were especially fun. My only critique is that the writing sounds (not saying it is) a bit algorithmic.
I’m not accusing you of using AI. Especially because it says “No AI” in the tags. It’s absolutely everywhere, and it can be easy to subconsciously pick up the way it words things, it copies the way that we write, so you are really not to blame.
There’s been some places where the writing seems a little formulaic to me. Lots of similes, rules of 3, and phrases like “too ___.” Or “Not ___. Just ____.” While these techniques aren’t bad by themselves, they’re very commonly used by generated algorithms. When used repeatedly and put next to each other in close succession, it can seem jarring. Especially when I read “The lamp beside the door casts a soft glow across the room — warm, comforting, familiar.”
This was just meant to be constructive criticism, and you of course do not have to follow it, and I really did enjoy the game, you did an amazing job!