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"You're already starting to live like they won't. That's important."

This game is really so beautiful. The visual design is spectacular. I greatly enjoyed the storytelling. It reminds me of my favorite play Eurydice, by Sarah Ruhl. I'd highly recommend it. It also reminded me of this game someone made for a previous jam I did. Great work. Please keep writing and devving, I'd love to play more!

My only minor feedback is that I think the pacing lags a little bit, and I think most interactions with Croakston and Greowl could contain more dialogue choices that break up the lines that are currently there into different dialogue branches. 

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oh wow!! 😵‍💫 Thanks for the feedback and the kind words!! This is my first time making a game with dialogue, so I still have a lot to learn 🫡I'll have to write down your recommendations, they sound good😄 Thanks again!!