First of all, i absolutely love this VN. Great work!
I was wondering if you're gonna add more music (including ambient sounds) to the novel?
For example in the beginning, you have music at the tennis courts, and then i recall there being a good track at Spencer's workplace (heh). And of course there were also ambient sounds: showers, amusement park etc.
I often find that the silence continues for so long, that it could use some sort of an immersion element. (Full on music fits to places like the characters' workplaces, while ambient sounds fit to more "public" areas, like the amusement park, highway, nature etc etc)