Thanks! I was a bit worse at writing at the time, but i think i have mostly fixed those issues by now in the future build! (specially point n.5 and the tenses mixing) Altought, could you explain to me what point n.4 means? id love to know if i need to work over it still
Hi.
The GUI, graphical user interface sometimes didn't match. For example, you said the mail lead was expressionless/stoic as implied when she said she could really read him on their first meeting, but his face kept changing throughout the conversation. Also, it's probably hard to draw a character sitting down, but when they were having coffee, the male lead stood for almost the whole scene. It made the cafe look like the background.