Promising so far! I like the variation of LIs both personality-wise and looks, and I always like a good intrigue story. Kain's whole deal is very interesting. Couple of points of feedback though:
- GameStoryLog has this game tagged as Harem, but the dialogue in the intro ("keeping you from others", or something like that, when discussing choices) implies it isn't. Might want to clarify that
- Renders are sometimes grainy, and hair textures are notably low quality. I'm sure that's just an issue of your GPU not being top of the line and honestly doesn't bother me much, but it's very noticable. The animations themselves are great, though, even if they're fairly low-quality.
- Too much "tell, don't show". Having a codex is great for looking up information when you come back to the game after a few months when a new update is out, but having info in it from the start that doesn't appear in dialogue makes it feel like homework rather than a place to go "what was that again?"