lmao it is but there's a reason why it is. It's due to his powers but if you're not into that stuff I get ya lol
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I see only one epissode was done from the year i left. Honestly came to ridicule the dev but after reading comments about how he has no power and is still making contact with fans to let them know hes still active won my confidence back i hope to see this game flourish but sadly i will have to put this game in the back burner at the moment due to lack of content
He never said that,you're not getting the point of what he meant. Neither did I the grammar and over all english was shite lol. But what I'm getting from his rant is how you are molding the main character to sound like a little beta or loser. In retrospective he's kind of right make him relatable give him some more charm let him be an extension of yourself per se him whining about being a virgin and getting not girls does gets tiresome to some readers. Hope that helped
Ok, so i'll give some constructive criticism the start is just not that good. I'm not truly engaged in said story im sorry, its not the worst but the dialog feels forced no natural banter. On top of that the humor seems like you're trying to hard. Also could you stop the Dora explora like monolog a little? him breaking 4th wall just takes away even more from the feeling in the game. Easier ways to just explain the surrounding of your home was to do chores a few remarks on the area but acting like a literal host and looking at the camera is annoying and not funny or "quirky" other than that I see potential if you keep chipping away at the minor details I've pointed out the game would be OK.
Update: I judged to quickly after finishing chapter 2 and 3 I have to say it was enjoyable I still stand by my previous judgment of the first chapter though rocky start but got a lot better progressively suggest others to give the game a go
that's what I'm mad about public release there's still pay to see lewd scenes hence my anger towards this other than that it's a good game just not worth spending 10bucks on at the moment especially with less than 1 gig if content with that said I hope the best this dev has great potential with his writing