What happened to the announcement you said youd make on the progress almost a month ago i need my fix man haha anyways i hope all is well and you get this game done it has so much potential
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I'll probably get so much hate for this. But i have to say it, patreon exclusive scenes are kind of bs! why should i have to pay for lewd scenes on a public release? I would understand if this is until further notice, when you finish the game a bit more. But if this a set in stone policy I really gotta be honest that's very greedy and I don't see that as being the reward for patreons if that's the defense. I think them playing the game early and getting polls for said scenes is more than enough privilege. Also its not like you are drawing this right? I assume its AI is that why you need more money ?With the bitching and complaining out the way I will say good game and I would recommend it just gotta have a few bucks on hand sadly
My opinion so far of this game an interesting plot similar to Entreum if I do say so myself. I assume you were inspired by said game? Anyway it's good game my only complaint and take it with grain of salt I've just started writing and learning the elements of characters dialog. But you need to show not tell with some scenes. For example, when Lara was acting strange in the kitchen we the viewers/readers already know this since from her blushing and stuttering in said dialog there's no need to have the MC have inner thoughts twice about said subject. With that said the writing is good I find it enjoyable! 9/10 so far keep it up my good sir
Just horrid character Erica is my highest complaint of this game its a good game if you actually gave the character some balls ive seen gay men that act feminine that have more balls than mc like wtf and dont get me started on erica what kind of shit is this she beats and robs me humiliated the man and the only way to have a impactful relationship is to not get revenge its not bad writing im sorry if it's coming as I'm saying that but there were a million ways I could've written revenge and forgiven her afterwards make her submissive but this pissed me off I need to be a good boy to not get ntr like wtf ok after my paragraph of pitching I give the game a 7/10 has lots of improvements especially mc he makes me feel disgusted to even call him a he
My only complaint would be the lack of bad guys used in the game like the cannibals and final group you kill in game were perfect fillers for the middle of the story where most fans complained it dragged (not me just what i hear through reddit and other platforms) also the chick that gets killed at the end kid of a waste in my opinion still a great game would put in my top 10