What a cool colab woah!! Can't wait to tinker with some of this for my campaign.
Hope I can help by pointing some typos, even though it makes me look like such a neeerd 😭:
Pg 9. "(...) into their Venivindi (...)", "(...) purchase a Veniveidi (...)"; name keeps changing, unless you're doing a vidi vini vicci subtle reference?
Pg 10 "(...) enjoying it's robust (...); its.
Pg 11 "(...) into (litteral) productive mania."; literal.
Pg 22 "I would purchase a pronoun"; no period, similarly to "we hate your pussy", but there the questions seem to come from different people due to how they're written, so perhaps that one is supposed to be part of the joke.
Pg 32 "(...) called in for fi eld (...)"; field.
Pg 41 "Once selected can't be changed (...); should probably have a pronoun, as "it can't be". Similarly in "I steal theirs and claim as my own."
Pg 44 "lovers embrace"; pretty certain it should be "lovers' embrace" instead since it's being used as a noun?
Pg 45 "(...) then when it started (...)"; than. "(...) if the fire continuous"; continues. "(...) until you put it out"; no period.
Pg 60 "(...) serious internal threat"; no period.
Pg 65 "Human sized-versions"; human-sized versions.
Pg 66 States that Mani's assistant strangely resembles Ysabella, but there's no mention of this person anywhere else on the mission. I believe it might refer to Azucena, and the name was changed at some point.
Pg 67 "(...) two items instantaneously"; no period.
Pg 68-71 Terms like "Agent", "Relationship" and "Anomaly" should be capitalized throughout to follow the Agency's writing standards. I'm not naming every instance.
Pg 68 "property damage in school zones have skyrocketed"; "has", since it's referring to the damage and not the zones.
Pg 69 "(...) how over active (...)"; overactive. "(...) is small preschool," either "a small preschool" or "Small Preschool", if that's its name. "a grandiose looking treasure chest"; I believe it should be "a grandiose-looking treasure chest"? Not 100% certain. "a 12 year old kid"; 12-year-old kid. "(...) and has the current aspirations for game design."; "and currently has aspirations for game design." is more correct, though "and has current aspirations for game design." could suffice. The second paragraph of Points of Interest is missing a chunk at the beginning!
Pg 70 "(...) to an expanded domain"; missing colon. "Sandbox: the land (...)"; "Sandbox: The land (...)". "Violent for fight scenes, ect."; etc. <Shutdown/curb> should be italicized to follow writing standards.
Pg 71 "If captured, The anomaly's power (...)"; no need for capitalization. That sentence has also been rewritten incorrectly (repeated some words). "This seemingly innocuous looking chalk"; again not 100% sure but I think it's "innocuous-looking chalk". "Air is 10 times heavier,"; no need for capitalization.
Pg 76 "(...) of the area discretely,"; discreetly. "a large sized locker"; large-sized locker.
Pg 84 "(...) in Agency work"; no period.
Pg 85 "(...) or vice versa"; no period.
Pg 88 "(...) to it's current form (...)"; its.
Pg 98 "(...) your fire consume (...)"; consumes.
Pg 99 "Your fire's have (...)"; fires. This sentence has to "but..." and is constructed in a way that makes its meaning not readily apparent (to me, at least).
Pg 100 "Anything effected believes (...)"; affected. "This Ability effects Anomalies as well."; affects. "Anything that is effected (...)"; affected. "Anything effected by (...)"; affected. "Highlights my enemies weaknesses"; enemies' weaknesses.
Pg 101 "(...) immune to the effects"; no period. "(...) under the abilities effects (...)"; Ability's effects.
Pg 102 "with one of of your"; double of.
Pg 103 "(...) as if you were smoke"; no period. "you breath in into"; breathe in
Pg 104 "(...) effects to your Lair"; no punctuation. "and you mission take 1 Burnout"; I don't know what this means?
Pg 105 "(...) a breading population "; breeding.
Pg 106 "(...) darker place then someone else"; than. The sentence is also missing a period. "If you Offer to this God any 3s (...)"; "If you Offer to this God, any 3s (...)" should make the sentence easier to read.
Pg 107 "As a result whenever (...)"; "As a result, whenever (...). Also missing period. "(...) excruciating details."; "excruciating detail.". "(...) and takes 3 Harm"; no period.
Pg 108 "They starts hostile (...)"; start
Pg 109 "commendations" should be capitalized.
Pg 110 "During the abilities duration,"; Ability's duration. "(...) skilled in its use"; no period.
Pg 111 "a birds eye view"; a bird's eye view. Also missing the period, as well as the next sentence. "as you burn horribly"; no period.
Pg 112 "is the the rebirth of"; double the. "gods of the old work"; world. "(...) they grow in size their skin (...)"; "(...) they grow in size, their skin (...)". "cannot be reduced"; missing period. "a player controlled Vessel"; a player-controlled Vessel. "This effects cost (...)"; effect's cost.
Pg 113 and 114 The phrase Loose Ends should be capitalized and isn't throughout the pages.
Pg 113 "(...) Harm than before"; no period. "quantities of fire's"; fires. "peoples tempers"; people's tempers. "wildfire's pop up (...)" ; wildfires. "(...)" like a feint fire (...)"; faint. "Surtr’s Domain increases to being within 777 meters if any of his vessels he controls"; "of any of" and missing period.
Pg 114 "The earth quakes under foot"; underfoot. "(...) is collapsing on not everyone survives,"; "is collapsing, not everyone survives,". In that sentence Relationships should be capitalized and isn't (as well as Seek, I believe?). "This include (...)"; includes. "But the fire's (...)"; fires. "(...) different then the one (...)"; than. "Whatever it is its (...)"; "Whatever it is, it's (...)". "Luckily the Agencies (...)"; the Agency's. "(...) somewhat self determined,"; self-determined. "(...) ASAP, and Urgent (...)"; an Urgent. "(...) the agency has always"; Agency. "(...) trapped in the vault (...)"; Vault.
Pg 116 "(...) in the smokes area (...)"; smoke's area. "Your gone"; "You're gone".
Pg 117 "(...) due this instance of (...)"; due to. "(...) that is "burning" thing spreads"; omit "thing". Three effects are missing their periods. "(...) use an Ability targets (...)"; "(...) use an Ability, it targets (...)". "(...) more targets then (...)"; than. "(...) ally is effected by something,"; affected.
Pg 119 "(...) into the targets mind at will,"; target's mind. "(...) to control the targets"; missing period. "(...) of Control for free"; missing period. "Choose 4 of your Abilities assign them (...)"; "(...) Abilities, assign them (...)". "If an Abilities number (...)"; Ability's number. The failure effect has similar typos.
Pg 120 "field team" should be capitalized, I believe. That sentence is missing end punctuation. "(...) your fire effected the world."; affected. "(...) profoundly effected by you."; affected. "(...) to even the agency,"; Agency. "(...) your relationships in a major way (...)"; Relationships. "(...) your fire effected the people around you."; affected. Effect → affect happens several more times in this page, I'm just not naming them anymore. The one that should remain is "long lasting effects", which should become "long-lasting effects".
Anyway great work everyone, loved reading everyone's contributions ❤️