Thank you for playing, and for your detailed feedback!
I fully agree on the game being a bit too easy, these games for the Saskatoon Global Game Jam were all setup in a computer lab with people walking around, only getting a small amount of time for each game. For that reason I wanted to err on the side of being too easy, rather than being too hard and no-one being able to beat it.
Also I'm glad you enjoyed the story, haha.