I really like the vibes from the art!
The story is really good! I like how talents are seen as mythical beings and the inclusion of holostars!
And then the origin story for Advent and ERB! Wow!
No... this can't be how it ends! I need... more!
Some improvement suggestions:
- Please consider adding a title screen to adjust the game volume before starting the story.
- There were only sound effects at the start of the game. Would've been cool to have more as events happened during the story, such as when magic is cast.
- I read other comments and see you plan to team up to make improvements to the game. Good move! It would be really cool to see it become a proper game, maybe with meaningful choices that can lead the player to different endings.
Great work!