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Amazing game! I'm bad at the puzzle so unfortunately, I can't progress much. But the quality make it feels like a completed game!

Also it's made by Moka so there's absolutely nothing wrong with it.

Nooo Shiori is bad! You can't side with evil!

And thanks for the compliment! It means a lot!!

Nice. Another game made with LOVE!

Thank you so much for the compliment! I could have finish the game as a whole if not for irl stuff, unfortunately. This is definitely much riskier and larger scale than my usual jam games. The story have more mature theme compared to the family-friendly spirit of Hololive, so I tried to tone down a lot of the violence and social problems. It thus feels a bit more comedy, but I'm glad it didn't affect your experience, maybe.

 When the rating done I would definitely add some BGMs, lol. I always play game without volume so I didn't realize how important it is. Again, thank you so much for checking out my game!

No Freaking way! I'm a big fan of your Inashi game. Thank you so much for checking out my visual novel!

I was busy with university so I only have one week and a day to work on the game. I wrote the whole thing on the last day and it was like few minutes left before deadline, so I only managed to download two free SFX and that is lol.

I usually play game with my volume turned silent, so this was a good lesson for me to not underestimate the magic of BGMs.

I really appreciate that you find my game enjoyable! Inashi was so polished and beautiful. I was so amaze on how you could programmed the second window... oops, I need to shut myself before I spoil everything.

Thank you for your kind words. It means a lots!

Sorry for the late responses. I saw the notification, but I couldn't reply immediately because I was looking for the right words.

I appreciate the feedbacks. I agree that the reading parts could be separated into smaller, digestible chunks. And many many more points in your comment that I can't write them all out.

I don't want to flood this page with 3 long paragraphs to explain what changes I would make in the next update (it's just a plan right now so don't expect much). I managed to find someone with good writing experience and we gonna work it out together. It might not be what you have in mind, but I'm glad to see someone so passionate for the game! Thank you so so much!

The voice actor was a Vietnamese-American. Vietnamese was not their first language. I didn't expect them to pronounce the name, but they practice spelling it regardless. When I heard the voice record I was completely amazed.

I wasn't good at writing back then (not that I am now), so it was more like a skill issue rather than technical limitation.

Thanks for checking out the Muse! I made the game back in highschool and was really passion with it. Unfortunately, I was a dumb dumb  so the whole source code was a complete mess. Thus I couldn't continue any further, or I would bang my head against the wall.

*inserting discord mod irl picture.

Just kidding. Moka is a GameDev Vtuber. She's my oshi (I have like 10 oshi at this time) and also participated in the HoloJam! I was also lucky enough to get her review my game (not related to this game but now you have to watch this):

Lol I was very lazy on this (my first college jam). There's no gameplay but at least it has cool arts and... well.

It's unfortune that Godot can't calculate very well to test some cool graphs. Otherwise we could make an animation for this infinite math boss (thou your computer would probably gonna explode before it done rendering):

lol you can't win this long-ass game but you won his heart

thank you for your compliments! It took me out of surprise to see so many people like the idea of Yagoo in stone age. If I knew it I would have expand his lore a bit more lol.

Me too, man. Me too.

Noooo! How could you said those rude words. You gave me emotional damage :(((

That's a valid feedback! I'm more of a programmer/artist myself than a writer, so throughout the jam I didn't follow any writing framework, but just added scenes I thought it's cool. I understand it has a big pacing problem. Some parts and characters (like Magni) aren't really important, but they were added just because I'm a hololive fan and want to see them mentioned in the story. So that's probably why it feels like a loosely connected plots than a proper story. 

The children are the main characters, so I thought it's important to establish their relationship in early story. But I ran out of time and was unable to give them a show. 

You seem like a better writer than me. In your opinion, how would you solve the framing device problem in the story?

Glad you like it! It's unfortune that I can't work on the sfx/music due to the jam limited time. Tbh it's a miracle that I reach to Canadian Kronii part. I set aside my university to works on the game, so right now I have to priority my studies. I'm still interest in releasing future update, though it might be a very long time.

Thank you for your heartful comment! 

Nooo you spoiled the whole plots! Jk.

Glad that you enjoy the story! I spent the whole day drawing Canadian Kronii just because I thought it's the most funny part lmao. But it's true that she's playing a big part of the story. I might keep working on this if not being crushed by my university workload. But still I have the interest to update the story, though might not be able to completely finish it.

Biboo small frame struck me more like a spell user lol.  I also give me excuses to let her say the deez nuts joke in Thai.

 I won't spoil anything though, so let your imagination runs wild!

Now he's a part of hololive lore lol

Glad you find your favorite parts in the story! I spent most of the jam time on the drawings, and unfortunately didn't have the time to implement the multiple choices and audios on the later parts. It would been much better if I had a team to work with. 

I know it's doesn't feel like a proper game due to the lack of interactivity and abrupt ending. I might update the game with some screen shaking and proper sfx/music. Though it's quite a miracle that I managed to went this far in the story in such limited time.

Thank you for your feedback!

Thanks! I didn't have much time to polish the art. But it's nice that you enjoy it!

I think you can

Hi, I just read some of your smuts and got quite interested in how "dominant" your character is (sorry if it sounds weird). I want to create an nsfw VN this time, and it would be nice to  have you as a writer. If  you're interested in working with me then feel free to send a request to my discord: thegreatjellyfish.

Đỉnh quá, cho mình hỏi bạn sinh viên năm mấy vậy?

Fantastic! I just sent you a friend request. My discord account's TheGreatJellyfish. We can dm more about the game in details.

Hi, I just want to ask would you be comfortable to voice over lesbian character?

should we at least have some kind of ranking for specific categories like story and stuff? Im saying this because knowing I will be ranked keep me motivated during the jam. also it encouraged people to try out all participants' games and give review, so I will know that at least someone would play my game.

I'm here before the storm. My opinion, the sprites seemed to be better as digital arts. Redraw them into watercolor may caused the sprites to blended into the background. But I haven't seen your sprite watercolor version yet so I just make an assumption.

No problem, is this enough? It's true that I did join the server before but I rarly chat on there, and I don't think if I made soneone offensed. There is no notification about what I did wrong so I was very confused

the discord link for devtalk is expired, I can't join the server. 

Thanks for your feedback. Sorry for the late respond, I do not expect someone would play it. It took me a serious long time to actually draw backgrounds, so it's possible that the next update there would still have some scenes where the backgrounds are missed. Regardless, it means a lot to have someone who pay attention to my game, so again, thanks you.

It's not even half of the month yet, how could you draw that much?? And the story is so well made either. If it was me I wouldn't be able to finish them all with such short amount of time. I'm panic ahhh please tell me your secret tips

great, I'm glad to hear that. Here is my discord account: thegreatjellyfish. I'm a little bit busy now so I will chat with you later, you can send me your time zone in the dm for convenient (or just tell me where you from)

Hey, I'm currently programming my game for yuri game jam and this time I want to make it as a NSFW game (erotic writing), but I don't have any experience making NSFW game, and I think it would be helpful to have you as a story/dialog writer. Please reply to my post if you are willing to work for free

I assume my game got more rating because of my thumbnail

sorry for the late respond, here is my discord account: thegreatjellyfish

Hey are you still looking for a team?